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Monday, August 31, 2020

Persuasive writing

 Getting rid of Boredom , checking the time, gaming , talking to friends / parents , these are all reasons why I strongly believe that ois students should be able to go on their devices at break time.


My first reason is boredom, many children can get bored very easily so wouldn't it just be great to be able to reach into your pocket and pull out a phone ?  We would be able to do many things to keep us entertained eg: gaming . Gaming is very fun ( depending on what game you play ) and could keep us entertained for an easy 30 mins probably even more ! Then before we know it, break time will be over and we will have to go back to class to do learning but don't get me wrong , we won't be allowed to play on our devices during class time.


My second reason is talking to friends/family, what if my best friend was on the other side of the field and I couldn't be bothered walking over there, I could just text or ring her and we could have a full on conversation even though we are both so far away! If I started to feel a bit sick or hurt myself I could tell my parents personally and then I won't have to waste my time walking all of the way to the office to use the school phone .


My final reason is just doing fun but random stuff, i could check the time with it so i won't be late for anything . I could also use it as a calculator so I could cheat in a math test ( just kidding ) and I could also use it to take pictures and selfies , I could even use it as a torch, , I would just whip my phone  out of my pocket and ta daaa light.


In conclusion, I think being able to use our phones at break time is an excellent idea because it is fun, useful and keeps us entertained .


Yours sincerely ,

 Mia